Dear Reader, this Musea is a short story where scattered
events lead to surprising outcomes. Let
me know what you think. - Tom.
BLUE SMOKE.
Click! On came the TV
set.
This time of the week was Scott's favorite - Saturday
afternoon, chores done, groceries bought for the next week, apartment
straightened up, and coming up next his favorite show, the Korean TV Drama,
with subtitles, "You Are Too Much".
The story was coming to a boil!
He looked at his TV.
What is this? This isn't normal.
The screen showed a bird's eye view of a small white pickup truck with
police cars in pursuit on a major highway.
The captions at the bottom read, 'Metroplex Chase - 2nd Hour'. Beside that was a clock showing the
time. Scott had 10 minutes till his
show, so he kept watching.
Minutes later the suspect exited the six lane highway on to
the service road, ran a red light, and sped through the start of a residential
area. Something looked familiar.
The police cars in pursuit slowed down to avoid
accidents. The suspect speeded up, and
weaved through the drive home traffic.
Suddenly an unmarked black van ran its green light across
the path of the suspect, and screeched to a halt in the middle of the
intersection. The driver got out and ran off. The suspect was blocked. He
slowed down. Bystanders on the corners began to back up as they watched.
The white pickup then turned toward the people on the
sidewalk and slowly plowed forward, as they scattered, some banged their fists
against the side panels, he drove around the parked black van, weaved through
the other stopped cars, and accelerated again.
Scott thought, I know that corner. I know that drug
store. That is my neighborhood! That's a few blocks away from here! He moved closer to the TV screen.
The white pickup saw the road ahead was full of stalled
traffic. He swerved into a private parking lot of a large apartment
complex. Thirty yards further down one
of the long rows of open parking, he found himself cornered. The road ended. The police cars slowly pulled
up behind him. They surrounded the pickup, and blocked him in.
He got out of the truck, and crouched behind it with what
looked like a gun, or something shiny in his hand.
From the TV screen Scott could see the police cars on the
left, the suspect’s pickup in the middle, and the suspect running back and
forth behind it. Scott heard a pop and a whiff sound.
Then the window on his left shattered and his TV blew
up. Swirls of blue smoke rose up.
Scott dived to the floor.
He crawled away from the window to his front door, reached up with one
hand, and locked and chained it. Then he crawled as far away from the broken
window as he could and waited.
Outside the suspect decided to not throw his life away
there. He shouted out something, threw
out his gun that rattled across the cement, and lay face down on the concrete.
The police approached with guns drawn, took him into
custody, and put him in the back of a squad car.
Scott heard people talking.
He thought he recognized some neighbor women's voices. He crawled to the window and saw that the
crisis was over.
2
Scott talked to the police on the scene and told them about
the shot that broke his window. One officer went with him to his apartment to
see the damage. He followed the trail of
the bullet from the shattered window across the room into the TV set.
"You'll probably find the bullet in the parts."
"Want it?"
"No, just a statement."
In his statement, Scott said that he thought he heard maybe
4 or 5 shots? The officer said,
"There were three. One went into
the air. We still don't know where the
2nd one went. (Though it was never
found, it had gone under the eaves and buried itself into a two by four
beam.) And the 3rd one came here."
"I think that's all I need," said the
policeman. Looking around he pointed to
the chair up close by the TV and added, “You sitting there?" Scott nodded yes. "That was kinda
close," and he grinned.
"Consider yourself lucky!"
"Do you think he'll ever come back?"
"I don't think he could even find the place!"
3
Scott walked out with the officer and saw the landlord
talking to some tenants. The landlord was repeating to them what the police had
told him.
Scott approached the group and said, “Mr. Stratton, my
apartment was the one that was hit."
"Let me see."
Inside the apartment Stratton surveyed the scene. Looking at the window he said, "Damaged
the jamb too. That'll have to be
replaced. I'll get Ramon out here
tonight and board up your window. He'll
set up a time next week to fix it."
Then he looked at the TV.
"Do you have renter's insurance." Scott shook his head no.
The landlord seemed to guess the next question and said,
"I'll ask the owner if he'll cover the cost of the set, but I'm afraid
he's going to say no and claim it's one of those 'act of god'
situations." Act of one jerk you
mean, thought Scott.
Stratton called Ramon on his cell phone, left a message and
turned to Scott, "OK, call us if you have any other problems." Then Mr. Stratton went back outside.
4
About 90 minutes later Ramon showed up. Greg saw a long gray pickup out the broken
window, and met him in the hall. He
brought him into his apartment and showed him the window and TV.
"Me and my family were watching the chase too! So he ended up here of all places."
He looked out the window to the parking lot. "He must have been about
there." Then with his pointer
finger, he traced the path of the bullet through the window, across the room,
and into the TV set.
"I'll board it up for tonight and repair it next
week... I can also haul the TV parts
away if you want. The trash men won't
take it."
"Thanks," said Scott.
5
After making his dinner Scott went back to working on his
writing project. The phone rang. It was
his girlfriend Kelly.
Kelly: Hi hon.
Scott: Hi darling.
Where are you?
K: Stuck in the airport still. This is getting old!
S: Oh no.
K: The woman at the
gate said the very soonest my plane can de-ice and leave is late tomorrow or
more likely Monday.
S: You there in the terminal?
K: Yeah. I'm going to try to get a room if the airlines will
pay for it. If not, I'll sleep in the
airport. Hardly any food courts still
open though... What's going on there?
S: You sitting
down? I got shot at!
K: Whaaaaat?
Scott told her the story.
After consoling him, she said,
K: Maybe you should move.
S: But the guy wasn't
from here. He was from some small town
near Fort Worth, a hundred miles away.
K: That's true, you
haven't been fired on in your apartment before... I can't believe I'm saying
that!
S: Kelly, I promise that the next time some random fugitive
corners himself in my parking lot and has a shootout with the police, I'm
moving!
K: (laughed.) When I
get back let's go TV shopping. I'll find
you a good deal.
S: Good.
6
Tuesday. While Scott
was waiting for Ramon to show up, he continued to work on his latest writing, a
short story mystery. He had lit a stick
of patchouli incense and started a CD on his player.
Ramon showed up with a helper.
As they walked in, Ramon explained, “He’s my wife's younger
brother, Dylan. He's helping me out
today."
"Hi Dylan, come on in."
"He is deaf so he can't hear you," added Ramon.
"Though he is learning to read lips a little... mostly Spanish."
"Oh OK, well I'll let you get to work."
The two began to move furniture to get access to the
window. As Ramon spread out a plastic
work sheet below the window, he made signs to Dylan to get the tools from the
truck. Scott went back to his desk and
began writing.
Later, Ramon looked over to Scott and asked, “Are you a
writer?
"I'm trying to be in my spare time. I'm working on a short story featuring my
detective named, Leo Mars. He's investigating a suicide by a rich man's only
son. The father wants to know why his
son did it. So Leo Mars is investigating.
But I won't spoil the ending...
Ramon changed the subject, "What's that music? Is it church music? It's very dignified and nice."
"That's Mozart's Requiem. I like to play it while I write."
"I like it."
Ramon went back to work.
He and Dylan made assorted trips to his truck as they fixed the
window. The old jamb was taken out in a
flurry of dust, the new jamb fitted and secured, and finally a new window pane
added.
While Ramon was removing the sticker from the clear window
he said, "Your window is fixed. It
should be better." Then he demonstrated.
"It opens easier. The seal
is tighter so you won't have any draft underneath or along the sides. And this lever at the top locks in
better. These brown places are where I
sanded some peeling spots on the old window.
The next time I'm working in the building, I'll come back with some
touch up paint and make it all match."
While he was using a glass cleaner on the window, he
motioned to Dylan to start taking things back out to the truck. When he came
back he carried a hand vac that he used on the floor tarp, then the carpet
under it.
While this was going on, Ramon turned to Scott and said,
"Before I go, I'd like to write down what music that is and buy a copy. I
really like it a lot!"
Dylan watching them talk, was puzzled and tugged on Ramon's
sleeve. When Ramon turned, Dylan asked what he was talking about. Ramon slowly said, “I like the
music." He pointed to the player
and then to his ears. Then he played an
imaginary violin and swayed back and forth and smiled. Dylan lifted his eyebrows, rolled his eyes,
and shook his head.
Turning back to Scott, Ramon said, “I don't know how much he
knows about music. He was born
deaf... Let me write down what that
is." Ramon pulled out of his pocket a well worm, small pad of paper and
pencil, and waited.
"It's Mozart's Requiem.
This version by Saint Martin in the Fields.
Ramon said, “I want that music, the music on that one!"
Scott said, "No, I mean different orchestras have
recorded it, but it's always the same music.
"Oh ... tell me again."
"Mozart's Requiem, this version by St. Martin in the
Fields, but any orchestra version should do.
Ramon wrote down, ‘Mosart Requem by Saint Martin Fields,” and underlined it 5 times.
7
Later that week, Scott answered his door to see Dylan alone.
He said, "Here to paint," and he held up a small, well organized,
tool box with assorted things: brushes
in different sizes, a pint of off white paint, tapes, rags, and more. After
spreading out a thin plastic tarp to catch any paint, he began to work. First he carefully put a bit of putty here
and there in any tiny holes. Then he
began to tape the areas around the window.
Scott, with his hands folded, watched him work from across
the room. He was a little surprised at how careful, and meticulous Dylan was in
every part of the process.
After a few minutes, he went back to his table and turned to
the notebook with his first draft. This
evening for inspirational background music, he was playing a recording of
classic 50's rock 'n roll hits.
Scott's immediate writing problem was trying to figure out
the plot to his story. Right now he had
backed himself into a corner. He did not know what to do. He was sure of one thing, he wanted it to go
beyond clever, and say something meaningful; not just resolve a plot, and then
trail off. He scanned his initial notes,
put down his pen, and began to think.
The writing experts say that I have to have conflict that
drives the plot. There has to be an
antagonist, a heavy, a meanie, an arch villain.
But do I really? Who in my story fits the part, the kid that commits
suicide? Maybe. But he isn't even alive during the
story. The rest of the characters work
together. The rich father hires detective Mars, who gathers evidence, and
solves the mystery. But who is the bad
guy...
Then he thought about other writers and their work. Yes, for the most part the disruption of the
lives of characters comes from a troublemaker, a bad guy, one jerk in the room
- someone who upsets the rest. Usually
the jerk was someone in power too.
He liked that phrase, 'jerk in the room'. "Or I could say 'the room
jerk.'" He wrote both versions down
in his notes and underlined the first one.
Then he wrote, 'Who is it?'
Scott wondered, how far back did this writing rule go? First it was a nation of jerks, where one
army fought another. One side was always
pure and righteous, and the other fiends.
So in that case there was a nation of jerks in the room.
Society evolved over time and the jerks in the room, shrank
from an army to a renegade group that upset the civilization they were in.
These stories were about bandits, rebels, gangs, a space ship of aliens. Now we had a smaller group of jerks in the
room.
What next? Instead of
a group of jerks in the room, maybe it would boil down to a single jerk in the
room, a single evil political leader, or tycoon; a thief or murderer, a drunk
or drug abuser, a monster loose from a lab.
Or even less dramatic, a weird neighbor on the block, a mischievous wild
animal, or a jerk in the family that upsets all the rest.
If he was writing about the incident that had happened to
him in real life - the jerk in the room would be easy to spot. He'd be the guy in the pickup that shot his
window and TV. But what if my mystery
story doesn't have a jerk in the room?
Let’s say things continue as they are going in the world,
and the jerk in the room changes from a nation of jerks, to a mob of jerks, to
a single jerk, to.... no jerk at all. Let's say people advance and there are no
upsetters anymore, or they are so mild that it is more an amusing anecdote than
a Greek tragedy? Could you still have
literature? Could you still have great
writing that was worth reading? Could you still have a story that grips the
reader?
8
A few weeks later Scott saw Ramon with his helper in the
halls of his apartments. He stopped to
say hello. Dylan waved and kept going up
the stairs.
Scott: What are you
up to today?
Ramon: Painting
apartment #205.
Scott: I see Dylan is
helping you today.
Ramon: That is one thing he likes to do. He likes to paint,
and he's good at it. I don't much care
for it. I'd rather do just about anything else. I hate the smell...
By the way, we got that Amadeus Mozart piece. I told all about it to my wife. She's pregnant with our first - 5 months now
- and she was always saying that playing classical music would make our baby
smarter, more relaxed, and even cry less.
So last Friday night we went out looking for it. This used
CD place had a bunch of copies by different orchestras, but not the Fields one.
So I asked my wife, what should we do? And she said, “They’re just $3 each.
Just buy them all!" So we bought 5
different versions! And they ALL turned
out great!
We both play all of them a lot! She likes to go to sleep with one on. She
says she has less morning sickness! We
are going back to look for the Fields one too. That'll make 6 versions!
Scott: Wow!
Ramon: Yeah, I love
it. Inspiring music!
Scott: Yes it is.
Then the two separated.
Ramon climbed the stairs and joined Dylan in #205, and Scott went back
to his apartment.
Epilogue
It was quite by accident that Scott discovered it. He was at
his desk and he had dropped his pen on the floor and it had rolled somewhere by
the window. On first look he couldn't find it.
'Things can't disappear!' He got down on the floor and was looking
around when he happened to look up under the window sill. There, underneath, he found very thin painted
lines in light gray that read 'D. L. ‘18’.
Dylan had signed his work!
Musea #203:
(c) Tom
Hendricks 2018
Musea is:
Tom Hendricks
4000
Hawthorne #5, Dallas, Texas 75219
email:
tom-hendricks@att.net
big website:
tomhendricks.us
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